Monday, January 15, 2018

Lively Death Is Unthouched Comments

Rating: 5.0

O' look at pallbearer
With caravan the corpse
Slowly carrying
Step by step
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Britte Ninad 13 August 2018

Beautifully penned- Love can't die although everyone thinks it is dead Love just lives in lively death!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2018

It is a beautiful poem on life, love and death having touching inscription with nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.10

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Akhtar Jawad 24 July 2018

Loneliness is a glimse of death, Every new breath is death of the last breah, life is the name of living after every death, Fani Badayuni. (Har nafas unre guzishta ki hay mayyat Fani-Zindigi nam hay mar mar ke jiye jane ka.)

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