‘live Together Wtth Ache’ Comments

very interesting poem. i liked you way of writing. thanks for sharing.

Humourous, sarcastic.... Poetic touch given to attitude towards the unwanted, unwelcome guest called pain.... Interesting thoughts - not so light as they appear, as they belong to the deeper dimension of humour, which remains unnoticed and / or silent. Vanita.

Even the pain has been given its due honor in this poem. This shows the kind heart of the poet who does not hesitate to receive the most unwelcome guest, the ache.

u have a very unique style of writing and they have deep meaning.

Very thought provoking in your unique style of writing. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

Agree with Poet Almedia Knight, ’… fresh definition of 'Ache'…’ Give ten++ with melancholic euphony. WR

An intriguing and well expressed piece.

Fantastic presentation of Ache. Full of grit. What I understand to Live with Ache not in Ache. With Acheful joy Ten+++ to your toiling talent

I agree, this poem sure does present a fresh definition of 'Ache'. One that at least two of my sons would agree with whole-hearted. Job well done. Adeline

Your poem presents a fresh definition of 'Ache' and living together with it. You're colorful and vibrant-a vivid description of Ache. I rate this poem a 10.

beautiful and meaningful poem in short lines. voted10 surya

ache described so wonderfully 10

an original poem! really, it's a kind of Love Story! 10 for the faithfulness of ache!

Amazing poem, good idea, deep thoughts and insight...only truths about the nature of ache(s) .

unique form! ...a spirtual catharsis happening through these profound lines.

pains and difficulties, are part of our life, cause lies mostly within us, or it may somewhere else, but we know to live with pains, and our life remains moving on, ....well written

In me You enjoy: Your stay Temporary Or, permanent. With – Embodiment of Ego-less- ness. Reach us Uncalled-for, Unforced-for. [5]...with ache it takes us very close to HIM.it compels us to rememeber him when it becomes unbearable and here that is more important that they stay and be the part of misery... i like great write...10 read mine u do any thing u like...what do i seek

I emulate, en-garland You, with Flowers of Boundless patience, Color you with Tinseled tolerance, Elate you with Euphony And sodden you with Mellowed, somber Savoir of Sultry tears. [12] wow what a fantastic poetic structure and unique form...fabulous diction ever written...great flow and such an ease to read...Thumbs up...Bravo! ! !

cross section of life doc..........

ammmmmmazing flow! .........sinificant. 10+