Thy love is streaming to me
To immerse in and tranquillise
My parched, fretting soul
Like the holy Ganges
That slithers down
The Himalayan peaks
To the scorched valley
Of cracked, thirsty soil
Before it merges with
Wilderness of the sea
Dear Poet Parameswaran, This is a marvellous poem! The imagery is so fine. This is real poetry! Surely! - Live to love, love to serve...sublime, indeed! .......10
Thank you very much dear poetess Geeta for the comments and the evaluation. " Poetry is that emotional sublimity that flows down the Himalayan heights of our intellectual capability and subtle rationality"
Very well written, Great imageries..Flowing from the top to the bottom like river and becoming sea of vastness, that is indeed pure and unlimited love.10+++++
Thank you very much. Yes, love is like a river that joins the vastness of sea
and live the world on the bier of love.....interestingly set
Love i s so strong that in its course can clear off sorrows
Beautiful expression of words. Indeed love is beautiful when reciprocated. It has the power to quench the thirsty souls.10++
Thank you Arzoo Mehek. Love is so much precious that its value is fixed when it is weighed and measured by the loved one...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow.... this small poem flows into my heart as the sacred Ganges is flowing down from the Himalayan peaks, cooling every nerve in me! A beautiful poem!
Thank you very much dear poetess Valsa George. I am blessed with your appreciation of the poem. May I point out out that a number of my recent poems have escaped your notice, may be due to your preoccupation