Sunday, June 28, 2015

Live Those Answers Comments

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Don't be afraid
To
Disconnect yourself
From all that gives you grief
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Lyn Paul
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

Yes! ! And all that you do not need. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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I am amazed the way you come with beautiful lessons of life in the beautiful platter of your poetry. Good write.

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Kelly Kurt 28 June 2015

Great poem...Even better advice. It often seems easier to dispense than to live up to. My orchestra is jamming the rock opera, Tommy today. : -)

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Perry Biggerstaff 28 June 2015

Live those answers you gave to others.....Not only wise words, but perfectly phrased to make your point. I love your ability to convey emotion with few words. Surely a sign of understanding your content. Always a big fan of your work.

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Valsa George 28 June 2015

At times we have to shut a door behind and open a new door! Whether life is shared or not, one has to live one's life in dignity! Though painful, we are sometimes forced to change stations when the orchestra becomes jarring! An allusive write!

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Jak Black 28 June 2015

Wise words, Lyn. Good advice, given freely, should always be given consideration. Experience can sometimes exact a heavy cost. A very well written piece, good reasoning cleverly penned.

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Douglas Scotney 28 June 2015

reminds me of the Desiderata, Lyn

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