Friday, January 15, 2021

Live The Dream! Comments

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Let us make it happen;
And live it, for real!
Just as this existence
Bridges for worlds, two
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james watkin
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James 19 January 2021

Thanks for interst Luis. Feel like I'm back at school! It is..what I meant. Its just a poem!

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Luis Estable 15 January 2021

The are certain aspects in this writing that do not make the diction clear, and what about its? I think it is supposed to be it`s or it is. Its here seems to make no sense.

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