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poet hasmukh amathalal #174 on top 500 poets Poet's Page Poems Quotes Comments Stats E-Books Biography Send Message Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Poems by hasmukh amathalal: 5418 / 11196 « prev. poem next poem » Live Presence - Poem by hasmukh amathalal Live presence I look back and miss you You were really true You reared me like real human I felt for everybody’s pain I could not take you along As I was posted long back It was duty on frontier That was called border, , , , , , , , , , , such excellent write.loved and liked

Ying Ying Thanks my dear Hasmukh Mehta your message make me cry... Unlike · Reply · 1 ·

I shall always miss her live presence beautiful expressions, well penned, thanks for sharing.

I was afraid That she might be laid In my absence I shall always miss her live presence