*****live Like A Man***** Comments

Live your life like a man--this line is the keynote of the poem.Vipins' writing bears values always. Marvelous rhyming and thought as well.

The first parents fell under Nemesis and generations after them slog under that yoke...; but not everything is lost! God is our anchor and refuge.If we turn to Him, we can reach safer shores! A great poem! !

Written very well, Vipins

i felt it subtle for me when i first read it, but some lines are worth quoting like But some reached the shore of sin, Where you can hear their broken bones screams. and Some reached the shore of love to win, Where you can hear the trump and merriment words can enlighten.you've done it here.

i like, i mean love, this very much.i believe you have great poets in India because i get my inspirations from Hindi movies.can i learn from you?

good one. we have to live our lives as a human being. what choice have we got?

I totally agree with Prasanna, you deal with a multiplicity of issues in the journey of life. I love how you depict origins of humankind and go through the inherent behaviour patterns and attitudes of our predecessors. You tell a very intricate story, one that is both individualistic and universal at the same time. You characterise the biological pre-existence of our contemporary existence; how it manifests itself through us and how we develop to try and transcend it. It is a great way to depict our most inner turmoil that is not only spiritual, intellectual but also biological and universal. Your poem articulates a very interesting reflection.

Very nice write...fills me with hope...smiles n blessings

beautiful and so very true as you should, Cat

Nice content and flow thanks for sharing...

there are many things in the poem...a journey thro' life and its complexities and ending in hope...nice poem