Friday, March 14, 2014

Live In You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love you, live in you, long you so much -

You - a priceless rose, sunken with morning dews
Glowing so afresh and sizzling with your alluring youth.
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Amitava Sur
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Amitava Sur 17 May 2015

Thank you all the respected poets who read this poem and appreciated with your valued comments.

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Roseann Shawiak 21 October 2014

This poem is a priceless rose in the bouquet of your poetry, remembered it and wanted to read it again. Such a beautiful expression of your love, Amitava.

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Erika Wingo 26 March 2014

Very lovely and expressed with such emotion that it's bursting with love. What a lucky girl she is!

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Ramesh Rai 23 March 2014

A good message for me too, like to share with my better half and say her - I love you, live in you, long you so much ' A beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.10/10 Regards.

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Ramesh Rai 23 March 2014

A good message for me too, like to share with my better half and say her - I love you, live in you, long you so much ' A beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.

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Paul Sebastian 20 March 2014

The longing for the one you love is so well expressed. A great write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 March 2014

A great tribute to the one you love. Powerful words expressing the depth of your love.

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Valsa George 19 March 2014

A very passionate and emotive write overflowing with tenderness and a kind of adoration for the one you love! Powerfully expressed! I have already commented on your poem.... A Strange Peddler!

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Roseann Shawiak 19 March 2014

Very beautiful expression of your love. Great imagery and emotion seeping through. Please keep writing, you are very good at writing of and from your heart. A wonderful tribute to the one you love. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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