Live In Present Poem by Rini Shibu

Live In Present

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Living in the past
and swinging in the memories
Might be soothing to your heart
But it makes you unfit to live in reality
Is it not an escape from life
Like daylight it spreads on your mind
And dark nights encroach life
Come out of it and live in the present
Enjoy every bit of it
Because today's beautiful moments
Will be tommorow's sweet memories

Saturday, December 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,memories,past,present
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 03 September 2020

a poet can fill others life with joy

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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

Rini, those who constantly live in the past miss out on what is happening around them. Well penned.++10 Robert

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, Lovely poem exuding your innate positive energy. Past is something which nobody can change. So, one should move ahead leaning his lessons from the past failures and gaining energy from the successes. Living in the past is for the mentally handicapped. One should learn to live in the present, building one's future. Wonderfully written. Congrats. -unnikrishnan

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Unnikrishnan for posting your feedback Rini

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 December 2017

Like daylight it spreads on your mind And dark nights encroach life Come out of it and live in the present... a great advice you re giving to all of us dear poetess. thank you very much. tony

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

Thanks Tony for posting your feedback...

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2017

Memories of life! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 30 December 2017

Thanks Edward for reading and commenting..

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