Monday, October 30, 2017

Live In Harmony Comments

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Not able to walk safely on the streets
Not able to sleep safely on our bed
Not able to go for work and schools
Bomb blasts and gun shots everywhere.
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Rini Shibu
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Suresh Kumar Ek 03 September 2020

still rascism persists in the world! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Carl Roussell 19 April 2018

It would be a wonderful day if this poem's dream came true. Well said, Rini.

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Rini Shibu 19 April 2018

Thanks Carl Roussel..! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi rini, Your poem exhorts to hate hatred. Let us hate the hatred, but, as Jesus Said, let us learn to love the perpetrators of hatred and convert them... Lovely write..

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks for visiting this poem Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2017

The terrorism is going on at present society. Dear Rini, you have heartfelty described this sight. You have too so nicely inscribed how to live in harmony. I quote..... Stop extremism based on beliefs Stop this violence and killing innocents Love one another and live in harmony Let peace and joy dwell in every heart. Beautiful presentation. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 31 October 2017

Thanks Kumar for your good remarks

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Pen Wallis 30 October 2017

A fine poem that questions terrorism.

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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017

Thanks Pen for visiting this poem

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Daniel Brick 30 October 2017

Your first three stanzas detail the peril of today's world for people who truly desire to live in harmony with others. If only the men with guns in their hands and hatred in their hearts would stop to listen to us BEFORE doing violence, we would shower them with our good will and our the beauty and truth of our words. How could they do violence to us if they really deeply engaged with us? Your poem spreads the truth of our shared values.

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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017

Thanks Daniel, really we could shower them with our good will and truth of our words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 October 2017

A great ode to peace and global coexistence, Rini. Very sensible. Real and ethical teachings need to be spread around the world. Every community should sing the same song, the song of peace and prosperity. Thanks dear for the nicely penned poem. 10+++ for it.

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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017

Thanks Subhas.. Glad you liked it

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Lamar Cole 30 October 2017

Great poem about live in harmony.

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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017

Thanks Lam for reading this poem Rini

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2017

A thought provoking poem Rini..! So brilliant draft on social issue with a great urge to restore peace.. Great work..!!

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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017

Thank you so much Dillip your words are encouraging

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