Wednesday, January 3, 2018

Live In A World Of Strife And Still Think Of It As One Family! Comments

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How can we adapt to this mysterious principle
Of oneness of universe,
So widely spoken by all leaders in religion
As well as in politics and economics?
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Savita Tyagi
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Bri Edwards 23 January 2018

i like Rajnish's idea (stated in his comment) that Savita is using irony, but i did not think so. i'd HOPE SO, but i just thought she was on drugs! (i still 'love' her) and i am about to put her poem into my/our February 2018 'showcase', found at this link on PH: [[i'm not sure if she wants adopt or adapt in line one]] Thanks, Savita, for offering this poem. (to be continued) .............

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2018

2.maneuver oneself into (a position of favor or office) by subtle manipulation. synonyms: worm one's way into, ingratiate oneself with, curry favor with; foist oneself on, introduce oneself into, edge one's way into, insert oneself into; infiltrate, invade, sneak into, maneuver oneself into, intrude on, impinge on /// informal muscle in on ...........(to be continued) .......

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2018

I think Savita means insinuate as in one or more of the synonyms of definition #2, below: 1.suggest or hint (something bad or reprehensible) in an indirect and unpleasant way. synonyms: imply, suggest, hint, intimate, indicate, let it be known, give someone to understand (to be continued) ...........

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2018

favorite lines: Like a river, identity of family is of a continuous change And so are worldly relationships. and: Few crack members of family insinuate fight And the world goes topsy-turvy! ............BUT...................(continued) .....................

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Rajnish Manga 09 January 2018

Whole criteria about 'one world one family' seems to have been busted- with terse irony- in the poem. I am pleased to add it into the list of my favourite poems. Thanks a lot for sharing. Few crack members of family insinuate fight And the world goes topsy-turvy! Sooner or later they come to their senses.... (But not before creating so much turmoil)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 January 2018

The naked truth and reality of life is beautifully depicted in your poem! We always face a battle even we are in family… Like a river, identity of family is of a continuous change and so are worldly relationships…very insightful…….thanks dear madam for sharing…10

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Irfanulla Shariff 04 January 2018

Very thoughtful words with great message. I enjoyed reading your poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 04 January 2018

Your poem eloquently depicts the sad reality of the world we are living in; if only we could expand our consciousness to elevate us to higher dimensions; a voice within each of us, whispers- the change is going to be for the best.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2018

Brilliantly expressed. Beautiful poem with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.10

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