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great one! keep it up

Well constructed piece, thanks 10 Lynda xx

good poem indeed! ! ! plz comment on (my paradize) after sir.Ronald Peat) revised it..

Great poem, with an interesting, single rhyme scheme. I wonder how you must have felt when you wrote this...

a poetic sculpture chiseled with your fine words

Antwathreo Leopold (10/19/2009 8: 25: 00 AM) it seems that the construction of this work is very familar...the whole piece dictated by a single rhyme scheme....?

it's ok to me it sound's like a chicken that was tap dancing to you're keybord sorry it's just the truth.

poetry is sculpture in verse....we have to know what to throw out and what to keep...so that what remains is all that we need....

Nice rhyming and reflection of creativity. Very good metaphors and imageries.

creativity in prefection...well done! ! !

poetic in every way! Wonderful!

good poem i love its flow

Like Safari full of wildness known The line above reminded me of my experience Livingston, Zambia. Yes the Safari, beautiful to experience; and it was a chance that would not be given to me till I live (unless if I will be given another chance to travel to that beautiful continent, Africa) . Anyways, your poem is full of in-tense feelings- the feeling of wonder and awe. Keep it up…and learn from its message of beauty.

This is good :) Keep up the good work :)

you've got quite the creative mind. Lovely! ! :)

Obinna, Even though I think this poem exhibits an excess of monotonous rhyming scheme, I like your ideas and imagery, and salute you, friend.

I have to say this is pretty good but just the first words you first said talking to me your work isn't as good as you think Robert Frost is still high over you.

i like the imagery. very nice poem. :)

You seem to write in this form alot Obinna, but it works well for you my friend, good job.

A well crafted poem that I enjoyed reading.