Live Happily Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Live Happily

Rating: 5.0


This life is drawn by desire and aspiration
There is a tug of war between the creations
This heart is beating the drums of wants
Clouds are drifting away from Sanai mount.

Is it a dream or my own imagination?
That I see you clearly when I close my eyes
I see the smile assuaging your face
I hear your voice like a rhythmic base

No one is playing but I hear a Piano
Flute is flowing like mountain's volcano
Leaves are whispering to me slowly
Shake everything and try to live happily.

Saturday, November 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: happy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 17 November 2018

Very nice poem. Flow and rhyming is beautiful. 'Is it a dream or my own imagination? That I see you clearly when I close my eyes I see the smile assuaging your face I hear your voice like a rhythmic base'...is what happens when you are in love.Enjoyed.

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Biswas Mukhija 28 November 2018

A wonderful rhythmic poetry, it has soothing effect on soul.

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Indira Renganathan 28 November 2018

Live happily should be the motto of one's life....only if we are happy we can make others happy which means a happy social life....good thought, good poem.....10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2018

No one is playing but I hear a Piano Flute is flowing like mountain's volcano Leaves are whispering to him slowly Shake everything and try to live happily........nice poetic expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.

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T Rajan Evol 17 November 2018

A twist and turn in this poem makes you read twice marvellous piece.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 November 2018

You have described the intensity of your emotions through wonderful imagery! These are the sentiments of a heart in love, of an exuberant mood, with a delicate perfume of mystic poetry!

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