Thursday, September 10, 2020

Live For Today Comments

Rating: 4.0

Be not afraid, the realm of darkness surely comes
When least you expect the black night of the soul
When you think with confidence tomorrow borne
The very best of you; made you completely whole.
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L MILTON HANKINS
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Steve Howard 28 September 2020

Excellent Rhyming with a hopeful touching theme. Very well done. 👍

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Michael Walker 20 September 2020

I already try to live this way, having become so uncertain about the future. Precise rhymes. Very good. M. Walker.

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Savita Tyagi 18 September 2020

Beautiful poem filled with hope and inspiration.

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2020

A profound philosophical rendition nicely penned in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful creation with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Soran M. H 10 September 2020

Beautiful and useful advice that instills in us the spirit of hope in OUR life, as we see hope in the mirror of the universe according to what the experimental poet drew for us in this rare masterpiece,10/10 well done

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Soran M. H 10 September 2020

When least you expect the black night of the soul All your hopes and dreams caught up in tomorrow Think not distant thoughts beyond the days you see And do not let the next day's troubles borrow

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