Friday, November 1, 2013

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In the winters gloomy night
Within the sparking of the moon's light
My one glimpse on my wooden tab
made me to stick on my writing pad
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Fatima Obaid
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Susan Lacovara 05 November 2013

A lovely free flowing poem that speaks to the poet in all of us! Nicely done! PEACE

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David Wood 04 November 2013

A delightful poem I enjoyed reading

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2013

Wow such an angelic touch poem pennd with a fine poet's pen. Thumbs up.! To sense God's presence is the greatest feeling. Pls do coment my latest poem.

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Sierra Perez 01 November 2013

I think it is rather pleasant...just needs to flow a little more. Otherwise Nicely done Fatima Obaid

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