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Live in the my mind,
Live in the my world,
You're very wild,
I'm very cold.
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awwww lucky girl better come find you...! ! ! ! ! You might want to think about taking the 'the's out before my mind and my world, they make the piece slower to comprehend... Overall fantastical job! :) : P
A gentle sort of 'rap' poem - with a pleasing beat and an easily accessible structure. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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7/30/2025 12:33:06 PM # 1.0.0
Give me your sorrow, Give me your pain, I'm lonely tomorrow Because I am rain......beautiful one with lovely words....10 read mine rain delay...rain has come... watchinghelplessly.. all rain poems...