Monday, June 1, 2009

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[ a conversation with god]


In JUST a word tell me..i asked
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Bob Blackwell 10 June 2009

Wise words...just live in your own true Self. Great poem 10+

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Lady Grace 08 June 2009

GOD the almighty, the powerful and the creator of the first beginning..grace

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Mamta Agarwal 03 June 2009

a really beautiful poem with a good message. live not just exist to attain Him.. 10 Mamta

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Maitreyee Joshi 03 June 2009

this is a bEautiful poem.so simple but with agreat message.a 10 from me

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 June 2009

God gave us the freedom to live, but we are misusing the same. He gave us wind, water, fire, space and earth to live, what more is required for a peaceful living?

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Raj Arumugam 02 June 2009

a good philosophical poem; insightful...

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Ravi A 02 June 2009

We can't see the wind but only feel it. Subtler elements can only be expereienced and God is very very sublte. Such experiences can't be properly expressed in so many words either. Subtle means it can contain the gross. Words fail for a proper expression. 'Yadho vaacho nivarthanthe, aprapya manasa saha...' 'Live in the present ' is what all philosophers finally say but human mind hovers around the Past and Future. It is not the problem of God but only that of man.

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Indira Babbellapati 02 June 2009

yes, we all need to live...we all moved away from living!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

Excellent write, nicely composed. I love the last line most. 10+++

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Louis Rams 01 June 2009

you asked the right question, and was given the right answer. A BEAUTIFUL WRITE A TEN

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Catrina Heart 01 June 2009

Our flesh lives and die...but our soul lives into our faith............10+++++++

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Ramesh T A 01 June 2009

As God said live to see the wind! Feeling is most important! Nice!

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Carol Gall 01 June 2009

nice talk with God one day you will see the wind 10

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Ency Bearis 01 June 2009

great contemplation with God..try to capture the blessing...

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Tsira Goge 01 June 2009

Believers have seized to blessing always of god..10... All best, Tsira

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Sandra Martyres 01 June 2009

A brilliant converstaion with God...Samanyan.10

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rago rago 01 June 2009

an intrinsic relation always exist.......we respect the unknown and feel the unknown........never human.....neither we respect nor we think of others...... let us live for the human than for the God........you have penned beautifully......

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Priyanka Bhowmick 01 June 2009

seeing the wind n seeing God r almost the same thing.. both can be felt but cannot b seen...a gud conversation.

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