Sunday, June 24, 2012

Little Yellow Flowers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little yellow flowers
Dancing in the breeze
Little yellow flowers
Huddled round the trees
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Valerie Dohren
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Navya 19 August 2018

I am great. Fan of Abdul. Kalam

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Ken E Hall 01 September 2013

The message from the little flowers gives a soothing message short and luvli poem

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R.j. Wynn 13 June 2013

!) I mean 10, great write, perfect.

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Walterrean Salley 14 July 2012

Makes you take a second look at life and nature—the little things that mean so much. Very beautiful, rich and terse.

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Neela Nath Das 14 July 2012

It reminds me the lines of Wordsworth's poem, Daffodils. Short but very deep.

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Elna Nel 13 July 2012

this is beautiful, in its simplicity

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Adeline Foster 03 July 2012

Perhaps those flowers are dandelions. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline

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Juan Olivarez 03 July 2012

In the Great mojave desert, spring brings an abundance of little yellow flowers. I can't tell you the joy they bring, beautiful poem Val.

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Captain Cur 01 July 2012

It's the simple things and small memories that give us our greatest comfort and cause our quills to write. I sense you saw their vulnerability yet they supported one another through the storms of life. Great write.

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Danny Draper 29 June 2012

Just read this again, lovely. Thank you Val.

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King Big Head 29 June 2012

A rather quaint little poem, the king likes it Very much.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 June 2012

Neat.

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Joseph Anderson 27 June 2012

Let us hope those flowers will bloom again.Though wrapped in a poignant imagery style I sense your pain. A disturbingly, sad write

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Danny Draper 25 June 2012

Little yellow flowers in drifting shadow breeze they heave and swell, fragrant in Suns hue their radiance flows to dwell. Daisies or daffodil? Does it not matter to name apart that which intrinsically brings comfort to an open and willing heart. A beauteous poem and I can see those flowers and their gleaming butter smile. Lovely.

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Saiom Shriver 24 June 2012

a 10 for your brief and perfect poem

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Heather Wilson 24 June 2012

Yellow flowers Val, beautiful with so much meaning and thought.lovely little poem.

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Hans Vr 24 June 2012

Super poetic. The little yellow flowers that mean so few to many, mean a whole world to a poet. I truly love this poem. Very well written and full of meaning.

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Dave Walker 24 June 2012

A beautiful poem with a wonderful flow.

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