Thursday, June 30, 2011

Little White Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once was there a flower, a beautiful white little flower,
That had bloomed one Sun-kissed morning;
And shining like a pearl,
Amidst a meadow, lush and evergreen.
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Arathy Nair
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Vipins Puthooran 01 November 2011

It's an amazing poem, , well penned! ! ! top marks! ! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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