Little Whims We Always Care… Comments

Penny wise and Pound foolish - you propound so well, Ego a small word but causes even catastrophes in life. A wise poem to be heeded well in life as well. Short and crisp you serve Truth well.Angel

a poem with deep insight into our very nature, Kesav

GREAT THOUGHTS AND ADVICE IN VERSE! WE WANT OTHERS TO CHANGE! BUT ALL SUCH CHANGES SHOULD BEGIN WITH US! 10 + -Raj

A very introspective one, deep ideas in few words. Agree with Sonya on this point. Perfect flow and rhythm as always, Kesav.Thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.

A one go read, for its smoothness, with sour ego, we are so bound to it.10

Great show of poetics. Those last three lines sum up so excellently the entire them.....

emblem of soul, reminded of the poem you talk....so joyous to be reminded of what has been taken for granted...lost for nothing and what else you pay...so powerful line of words, settle in every conscience of man...thank you for sharing...a 10 +++

I think the first two lines are beautiful and memorable and the whole thing is just well done. Thanks friend.

Nobody is perfect Kesav. You are a great philosopher within a small poem structure. Well done! ~ love Karin

if we accept and forgive our small imperfections, we can see how much more beautiful we are.....

Ego; End up beaten down, ten fold! --------- great composition in 2 stanzas, philosophical one.......great opus about ego! ! !

If i say something in the light of pomo[postmodern] interpretation, that would be, signifiers- the words and the 'I' behind this poem successfully emitted signifieds which blooming in readers mind multiple way! thaoughtful and beautiful! 10+

Thats the true story of our daily affairs Yeilding to those fads, first Then look back and think.. hey.. go or not! ! ! Holding on to the voices of extreem self sense... Let go.. the treasure time of life. Whims and Fancies, we care Somewhere we have to lose For for reasons of our own or others. But dear, poet, you are so true Without these... caprice.. What life.. after all. As usual.. an absolute delight to read this. Hitting staright into the bull's eye. Thank you.

Interesting little poem you wrote there

wonderful philosophical poem, well penned with deep ideas, thank you for sharing..........10++++++++

A lovely poem Kesav - focussing on the importance of introspection...beautifully scripted 10

very meaningful... speaks significant thoughts really a great share 10++ Lovelots, Maia

Well expressed, it's not easy to understand the world of feelings and relations, a fantastic poetry as usual!

Indeed true! nicely expressed feelings. lovely to read the masterwork!

Very genuine feelings expressed here. Mamta has given you good advice. We should be blinder to the faults of those whom we love. And perhaps they will then return us the courtesy. 10+ Warm regards, Sandra