Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Little Voice In My Head Comments

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Little voice in my head - why didn't you shout?
Why didn't you yell and get it right out?
Why didn't you warn me the signal was red?
Yes how come you let me go steaming ahead...
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Susy Evelyne
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Stephen Katona 26 July 2014

I have a particular interest in the subconscious mind. Thank you for this lovely poem Susy. You write so well about things that really matter.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 January 2014

the inner voice, our conscience, sadly we aren't always guided by it. If only... an insightful poem indeed.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 08 January 2014

Beautiful poem, we all have this instinct, this intuition that something may not turn right if we do a specific thing. We just have to discern and listen harder to our inner voice. A very lovely poem indeed Ma'm Susy.

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John Brown 08 January 2014

It depends on what it is telling you Susy. I like the poem though, it has a good, well written feel to it.

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Susy Evelyne

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