Sunday, September 11, 2005

Little Toys Comments

Rating: ★3.5

Cars and trains
And boats and planes
Fossil rocks
Found in the rain
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Velvet Thorn
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Richard Quinby 21 September 2005

very cute, which is a GOOD thing in this case. But I agree the mouse stanza might work better at the end.I think it is the strongest one and should end the poem

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Mary Nagy 12 September 2005

Nice whimsical feel in this poem. Felt like I was looking around my kids room. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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