Little Town Girls Dream Comments

but the people stopped her at the door and begged her to stay and fell to their knees and began to pray....shedid not remainthenlord, s voice andthatmety bevery tragic inher life....good write with beautiful message.....10

I think you must be a preacher, Cause you have a way of bringing the good out in people. My guess, it was Jesus friend. I know her name started with M and it could of been Marlin. Another interesting write.

Its almost a fairy tale............but i bet this girl is more closer to you.

Liked the hidden message in this poem very well. Sometimes we should follow the omens to really discover our destiny. Nice one.

the story of the little town girl well narrated....the flow of the write was very natural...her voice..her singing could be heard