Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Little To See And Less To Do Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first thing I notice...
It's not the blue sky and the whispy clouds
It's not the sound of the railway
It's not people chatting and childrens voices; sports callers
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Keith Foley 21 August 2008

Liked your title (and your poem) . You can read the first line and the last of the last line and the poem would still be complete. Super job, great style. Keith

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Shaun McGurgan

Shaun McGurgan

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