Friday, November 14, 2008

Little Time Comments

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JoDonna Lapahie
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Nikki Clevenger 25 November 2008

I really loved this poem. I really can relate to it. Feeling like im so bored, but also time moves by fast. I liked it alot!

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Shaun William Hayes 15 November 2008

spoilt a little by quite, should be quiet i think, otherwise a very mature clever piece, in a few words it says a lot. well done.

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