Little The Bee1 Comments

according to a previous comment, i used this in my/our showcase a bit over two years ago. now it is TIME to use it AGAIN! ! ! Thanks. i enjoyed it again. bri :) i hope you are well OR with your Lord. you 'know' that part of the Lord's plan is to have you closer to Him in Heaven! ! !

A sweet little poem about the little bee and the beetle. One stays busy as in busy as a bee and the other one just waddles the time away. A wise comparison on nature.

is there a Little The Bee2? ? ? you DO want 1 to be part of the title i guess. i've sent to MyPoemList also. :)

this will be a perfect poem #2 from YOU for my May,2015, showcase. it is not too 'religious', but does sneak some of that into a nice nature poem. in the first half of the poem you do not capitalize winkle or little for the insects' names. i will leave the poem the way you have it on your poem page (unless you ask me to change it at all …later) . i'm more like Winkle. i like corn and sleep, but i also eat ice cream and pizza. favorite lines: Not me, as during spring time I worked with the sunshine Whilst idle Winkle the beetle Lives freely, looking sleekly Stays home eats corn flour............. especially freely/sleekly! - - - - - - - Made me sang... ........ may i suggest: sing? :) a bright, uplifting poem. thanks. bri :)