Friday, November 11, 2011

Little Stream Comments

Rating: 2.0

The feeling of peace longing for more
Watching reflections move with the flow
The water ripples beneath my toes
And of this place no one knows.
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Hazel Connelly
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Unwritten Soul 17 November 2011

I'm lost in this write, beautiful poem :) It really got soul inside...never stop sharing with all of us here_Unwritten Soul

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Margaret Beil 16 November 2011

Hi Hazel, this is such a pretty neat poem I felt like being one with the water, gently flowing along with the words. A beautiful image :) May I invite you to read my poem Spring.

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