Little Star Comments

liked ur LITTLE STAR... ur work appears as proffesional work. it could be admited to read for babies too :) as well as a matured one can drawn there, good work

Now thats a great poem... i love how it means so much... your an wesome writer and friend

this is the actual poem....bt u hv missed d last four lines As your bright and tiny spark, Lights the traveller in the dark, — Though I know not what you are, Twinkle, twinkle, little star.

wowwwwwwww rakesh this is really cute i lovvvvvvvvvvv vit anjali

Your poem takes this beautiful nursery rhyme and offers the reader a set of variations that is charming and imaginative. Wonderful piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

this is really cute... I love it! ! ! great job! Then the traveller in the dark, Thanks you for your tiny spark, He could not see which way to go, If you did not twinkle so. good lines. Becca