Tuesday, January 30, 2007

Little Orphan Girl Comments

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I slip into shadows
to hide my eyes.
I can't ever allow myself
to let them see me cry.
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Amanda Lukas
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Gaurav Silwal 31 January 2007

Your poem is quite touching, take care. Peace... Gaurav.

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Jim Foulk 30 January 2007

very beautiful. a very nice writen piece of lovely poetry.

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Amanda Lukas

Amanda Lukas

Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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