Little Ones. Comments

Nicely phrased and easy to read

john you really are trying to make me cry, when my kids left home I cried the wife asked me why I was crying, I want my children back then we both cried true, make the most of them.terry

nicely presented in rhyming couplets

you were right: I do like it. although there is a mistake in the spelling (whar's=what's) . but I did enjoy it, that's why I gave you a ten.

Little ones, Ah the Memories. I have been writing Poetic notes to my own little ones for Forty Years. I can see the Love you have. It radiates through your Prose. Nice Poem Daddy

little ones, this is so nice piece also advice is accepted luwi

I can see these words would work well in a song as lyrics. The opening line is so true as young ones can't wait to grow older and yet, life goes by so quickly. To laugh, have hope and the gift of love are important too as inspirational words for a song. love Karin