Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Little On Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

Life is strange,,,
it teaches us to walk and smile in sunrise,,
One day so it happens
from the road of roses it sweeps us to the river of deserts..
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2012

just as rivers are incomplete witout deserts..... incomplete without seas, , desert abosrb them and ruin their chance of meeting.. nice poem but....10

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Patricia Green 04 March 2012

I like it thi is nice keep up the good work!

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Shahzia Batool 04 March 2012

Life is really personified as a teacher...the effect of life, n passing time is truly described...thx.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 03 March 2012

beautiful true words about life... it is quite difficult and strange but we should enjoy it to create our happiness

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