Friday, October 30, 2015

Little Monsters Comments

Rating: 4.7

When dusk has settled on Halloween night
Look to the sky for a frightful sight
Look carefully high in the sky
Will you see witches flying by
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Darlene Walsh
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 July 2020

Such a nice poem, Darlene W. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 September 2018

'Just a little something for Halloween' - not just a little something, but a wonderful thing to match the scene. Loved your poem, Darlene!

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Bri Edwards 10 November 2016

so sweet! especially the 'chocolate' part. darla, it's been so long since i've heard from you that i had to ponder what your last name is/was. hopefully 'no news is good news'! ! bri ;)

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Stephen Katona 10 September 2016

I loved this entertaining warning. Thank you for this witty, flowing creation.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 April 2016

wow! ! what a sweet drop! ! enjoyed.thanks for sharing.

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Wes Vogler 24 November 2015

So you can write... limerick time... Looking forward to it nice rhythm

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Jak Black 18 November 2015

A delightful little poem, well constructed, with rhythm and rhyme and imagination. Not a fan of haloween myself but I did enjoy reading this.

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Valentina Fan 15 November 2015

It is so lovely!!! I love the rhythm of it~

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Hannington Mumo 13 November 2015

I don't celebrate Halloween and don't believe that the stories about it are true. However, this poem is a rare product of artistic skill. Keep it up gal...10/10

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