Monday, April 13, 2009

Little Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

You come to me now
I don’t know why or how
You smile to me, I glow with joy
As if I were a kid with new toy
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You... don't... want me...
COMMENTS
Costa Anakiev 23 April 2009

Dear young girl, it's lovely and naive. Well done/ Konstantin.

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Alison Cassidy 19 April 2009

This is my favorite of your poems thus far, Janay. It's straightforward, honest and above all filled with warmth. Love your title too. Your brother sounds like a great kid. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Hiding Nothing 18 April 2009

I dedicate this poem, To nikolas, my little brother a.k.a Little Man.

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