Little Kingdom Comments

its cool for me, because I love minibeast!

a wonderful poem, a nice descriptions of a world most don't pay mind to

Beautiful description of the 'underworld'... Terry

Your kind of poetry i like, just take ur pen n paper and write on whatever interesting you see around you, not whatever you feel within you... Great poet :)

Vijay, First of all thank you for inviting me to read this piece, it really is a wonderful and truthful way of expressing the realisation that your garden is truly a little kingdom, as much goes on in it as in our own human part of this planet and you have expressed it marvellously in your writing. Great work and I will be adding you to my friends list now to see what else your pen creates Peace Jon

Well written with the beginning of the alphabet orders in every stanza.10+

Some nice imagery used and with such a brief insight it asks for more expansion. Well versed overall.

Unfortunately many city dwellers are locked and jailed between concrete floors in cramped Flat, unable to see even sun at anytime in a day. They can at least enjoy this poem. Nice kingdom. Convey my best wishes to the subjects of your little kingdom.

Your kingdom sounds a very Interesting place to be.

that was a lovely little kingdom that you created with your verse! keep it up!

Lovely poem! You are lucky to have such a wonderful kingdom, we miss sights like these in a city like Delhi...

such colorful and happy imagery nature is. Your poem is like a nature shot taken by a natural artist. Thank you, Izzey Strange

NICE DUDE! ! im liking the alliteration its pretty cool lol

So that was of birds, now insects - this poem has covered more in numbers of the world of insects. If that was world of wings then this is a little kingdom of insects on earth. A poem of your good observation. Thanks for sharing. Gautam

Descriptive poem but nice to read. It seems that poet is a lover of Nature, even the lives of small insects are observed carefully.But I prefer to feel the inner poetic feelings of the poem...Thanks..

love it! you know what to do and you do it well.. please continue writing poems like this. :)

It's a wounderful poem. I love that cos its all about nature. Nature is life.

Dear Vijay I noticed that u like to link this poem to 'World Of wings' and I think that is because of the perfectly elaborated, poetic and skilled writing of both poems! The little kindom has become an animal opus so natural and so original, all at once! Good luck, Jihene

I like this one most Mystery millipedes moving in millimeters

wow, great way of decribing your little garden kingdom in a poem...awesome staff thumbs up...