Thursday, February 15, 2007

Little Joy's Of Life Comments

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It was dark in the evening,
But once the sun came out
It was a sign of a new begining.
A sign of birth filled the air
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Tiffany Saxon
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Jacqueline Antwi-danso 18 March 2007

This is a wonderful poem. I like the way you made the words rhyme together. And the way you expressed how happy the mother might have felt and how she was full of hope.

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Tiffany Saxon

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