Tuesday, March 8, 2022

Little Jimmy Comments

Rating: 5.0

A youth called Little Jimmy came
to work at the Bar J,
and when that scrawny kid showed up,
we all just thought, 'No way! '
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Cowboy Ron Williams
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Rob Lamberton 16 November 2022

Unwanted twists in the trail that teach us a thing or two. We all get some sand in our eye on this cowboy ride.

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Susan Williams 07 April 2022

well,4 stars would be staring down at Jimmy; s grave but there is no star option... so here's some stars anyway ***********

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Susan Williams 07 April 2022

5 new stars dot the sky over Jimmy's grave

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Susan Williams 07 April 2022

Oh, you took me down a dark path with that one. It is well constructed and reads easy but it made me sad, my friend,

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Smoky Hoss 23 March 2022

Sounds like Jimmy lives on pard, forever in your heart. Great poem.

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Bri Edwards 23 March 2022

It's hard to believe, BUT...YOU may be as great a poet as I, Bri, am! ! ! ;)

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Bri Edwards 23 March 2022

Ron, you aren't pulling our legs, ....are you? ? to my 'favorites' it's gone. bri : )

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Richard Wlodarski 20 March 2022

A heart-wrenching and beautiful tribute to a life cut so short. You're keeping his memory alive!

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Bharati Nayak 13 March 2022

A sad and touching poem....Some images never fade from memory !

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Rebecca Navarre 12 March 2022

We must try to hold tight and focus on the fond memories! .. and, , keep trying to let the painful ones fade away! ....

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Rebecca Navarre 12 March 2022

Very true some memories as such are hard to forget. Such a heart felt poem! .. Written with beautiful condolences/Poets notes! .. Beyond #'s.........................

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David Wood 08 March 2022

So sad but well expressed with feelings.

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Kim Barney 08 March 2022

Tugs at my heartstrings, partner. Well written! Five stars.

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Jayne Davies 08 March 2022

How sad x Thank you for sharing x

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Cowboy Ron Williams 09 March 2022

Thank you, Jayne. Is the 'period' key broken on your keyboard, or are those X's kisses for me?

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