Friday, August 15, 2008

Little Hill Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little hill

We climbed a little hill, unsure afraid
Trembling in innocence
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Colin Ian Jeffery
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Dean Hope 27 August 2008

very good way of telling such a fragile story :)

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 18 August 2008

Wow... I remember mine... It wasn't very good lol. Wish I could have described it the way you do. Beautiful poem.

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Alison Cassidy 17 August 2008

An honest and gentle reflection upon a timeless moment. Might I suggest omitting the sub-title? You don't need it. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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alice sunderland 16 August 2008

'so briefly' i like what i think you are saying here.

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