Tuesday, December 2, 2014

Little Hesitance, Little Sorrow Comments

Rating: 4.5

One last time she had asked me
when i had to depart,
'Will you come back again, will you? '
And i hesitated, i must say,
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Piyush Dey
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Amitava Sur 08 December 2014

Though very poignant write up of lost love what the lover intends to get it back with his intense emotion and desire, a beautiful expression... very nice

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 December 2014

internal feelings and music heard, ended with dreamy words that's the reason I say earth is dream land we see the stars and dream because we want our dreams to be fulfilled thank you

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Valsa George 06 December 2014

The lover feels that a part of his soul is missing.....! He is on a relentless search for his missing self...! Though he is disheartened, still he has hope lingering and is ready to go to the end of the world in search of her! A very passionate write! Enjoyed!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 December 2014

Nice moving poem scripted beautifully with poignant words......amazing write......10/10

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