Little Hearts Comments

Really love this, children are so innocent and pure at their tender age. We need bring them up in Godly and good morals.so they can grow to really express their real human nature and not been enculturize with through socialization which tend to bring either positive or a negative change on there life. I support the social and mental development of a child towards self discovery and actualization. God bless

Absolutely lovely. Goes to the core. Could feel the rhythm and purity, as well, of this timeless piece.

Meticulously depictive and as popetically warming as freshly baked bread...I am sure that I have said this before, but I feel compelled to reiterate the fact that you have a darting penchant for structure/metre, which as you know sets the stage for your work to be read as you would recite it... Superb write, young lady! ~FjR~

Another wonderful poem from a wonder-filled writer!

Lovely poem, children are angels in disguise.

So cute. Loved the subject-matter and the style of writing as well.

hi valerie, this whipped away the years for me back to my first looks at the tiny little souls id just made...lovely

A treat to read on the truths of children and the pleasure we get from new born babies and you delicately paint the pictures of them so sweet...luvli...regards

This gentle write is a perfect representation of new borns, their dependece on our love, our future.

You somehow captured the magic and essense of birth and parenthood with this poem. Feel it write it. Perfect.

Valerie, the sweetness of this poem is incredible, the flow and visualization sublime in every way. Just Divine Beautiful! It touches my soul. Thank you! Love and Light

Absolutely stunning write felt every word Val. Thank you. Regards Craig.

A poem out of a pure heart i believe! With deep rooted poetics in the fibre of every word! Phrase! Totally nice reading!

A beautiful poem Val, Little Hearts, I really enjoyed reading it, such a joy.