Friday, May 9, 2014

Little Green Soldiers Comments

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Tiny little soldiers pose far as a sea
Bright green they all are waiting for me
Week after week they keep on growing
Leaning this way and that as wind is blowing
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Darlene Walsh
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 09 May 2014

Hello Darlene. You capture the scene and season well, good work. Oh and get to work, here it grows again! Please check out my new poem, I'll Put Some Coffee On. Thanks, Loyd

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