Thursday, June 4, 2009

*little Girl (War) * Comments

Rating: 2.8

The little girl outside is humming
It seems the evil people are coming
The day will soon end
Where is this little girls friend?
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Saadat Tahir 12 July 2009

a long drawn bad dream...depicted very well indeed you have this flair with doing sad and dread poetry very well done cheers

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Natalie Kemura 26 June 2009

it seemed desperate and cold

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Joseph Poewhit 04 June 2009

Lots of emotions behind the words.

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