Little Girl Lost Comments

wow there's alot of strong emotion in this piece although sad it is a beautiful piece of poetry

strong emotive and devastatingly nostalgic..... even if Salvador dali's clocks are dripping all over the walls....their time remains unidirectional... a moment lost is lost forever....as much as the PINK.... we grab and clutch at straws and strings but..... lovely poem....superb talented job loved it :) ***

An interesting punch line there, at first I thought you were talking about your daughter. Read mine -Sympathic Pain - Adeline