Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Little Girl Born Comments

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Little girl born without a name,
Crying and warm without any shame.
Parents said goodbye and left her on the street,
Where soon her destiny she will meet.
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Jasmin Alice Read
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Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2013

It's a wonderful poem. Very thoughtful of you it was, to think about the little girl and pen these wonderful lines!

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Yasmin Khan 24 June 2013

It's a big idea in a little mind and expresses your concern with social problems at this very young age. Bravo! Jasmine keep on penning.

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Jasmin Alice Read

Jasmin Alice Read

North Yorkshire, England
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