Little Girl Comments

this left me compelety speechless this was beyond good you have a really great gift with writeing you can go somewhere far with it :)

I interpret this as depression. The little girl feels she wants to play and sing with the other children, but her body doesn't respond too well to her thoughts. She is melancholy in her attitude and in the way she talks. Everything is turned around for her. The last stanza shows the little girl's depression very well, and may be contemplating taking her own life. This is a sad poem, and tears at my soul to see this. Your images are clear, and the writing is super. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara