Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Little Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

He never saw her tears,
He never saw her pain,
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cecelia warner
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Lee Degnan 25 June 2007

Intense and immense... I'm glad to see, that although the ten-year old may have thought about it, that she didn't go through with it... proud of your skills, Shan-Banan! Love you much, Aunt Lee

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Norm Barrett 20 June 2007

this was intense, great poem

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Aurora Wells 14 June 2007

Such a sad poem, but beautifully written! ! Great job kid! ! Love ya hun...

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David N. Degnan 13 June 2007

Wow. few words more could discribe this poem, other than perhaps 'atistic', 'emotional', and 'excellent'. Great work cousin of mine!

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