Saturday, December 8, 2007

Little Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

The little flower dazzled in
In the sunlight, yellow,
Very beautiful, swinging
In the soft little wind,
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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL
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Polar Bear 08 December 2007

i like it, it's a creative way of describing the life of a flower. I tried to write one like this once, but it turned into something different from what i had planned. Keep up the good writing. :)

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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

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Trissur, Kerala State, India.
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