Wednesday, January 4, 2023
Little Farm Comments
Rating: ★4.0
Once again, I was able to run
Under the bright yellow moon
In the road where the lights are dim and the trees are dark.
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7/25/2025 8:22:33 AM # 1.0.0
The imagery is good, but there does not seem to be enough definition for me to understand exactly what you are describing. In my opinion this poem has potential but needs more work. But, you are going in the right direction. Keep up the good work.