Little Exercise Comments

An interesting poem. Captivating

A beautiful poem adorned with sterling images.

A wonderful poem indeed. Clever use of words giving a sweet flow to the poem. Enjoyed.

Wonderful imagery, 'badly lit battle-scenes' and 'like a dog looking for a place to sleep in'

think of him as uninjured in- the storm in dark coarse- fibred families the surrounding water all stuck as fistfuls of limp fish-skeletons but injured all in man made (battle) field!

A beautiful poem on storm and nature has been nicely and astutely executed.

Now the storm goes away again in a series! Nice work.