Friday, October 10, 2014

Little Eagle Comments

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Hey little eagle
Tell me where my beloved love is
When
You fly deserts away
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Baharak Barzin
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Daniel Brick 18 March 2017

The speaker is bereft, abandoned, close to despair. She asks a little eagle, probably because his smaller size makes him more approachable. This gesture will save her from despair, because it is based on the HOPE that there is in this faithless lover a trace of.sympathy. The messages the eagle will deliver is that her life has become 24-hours of suffering., day after day, night after night. If the man responds like a human being, he will least check on her, admit his fault and ask for her forgiveness. Then he will leave and really disappear from her life. She will be freed from her obsession and begin afresh in her search for love. Your poem makes me admire her and hope she will survivr to find a more worthy man.

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Baharak Barzin 18 March 2017

This is written for someone i even do know him yet. I believe i did it when i was petrified and afraid of being lonely

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