Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Little Do You Know Comments

Rating: 4.8

Little do you know what I'm feeling inside
Little do you know I'm trying to figure what's going on with me
Little do you know I'm trying to bide me some time
Little do you know I just need a key to unlock this mystery
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Alicia. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Connor Whyte 28 February 2016

Bravo I really really like the ending to this piece, you start out negative and unsure of what's wrong but at the end you turn all those negatives into a positive by saying this but little do you know that in the end I will escape from all this misery Inside of me. With a mind set like nothing like that is going to stand in your way, keep up the work I enjoy it.

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